Hi my name is Troy. I am a year 8 from Ahipara school. I like surfing, skateboarding, running, swimming, and dogs. I love being outdoors and doing lots of fun, adrenaline things.
Hi Troy, I like the way you gave us an example of a positive, helpful, thoughtful comment. Next time maybe work on your punctuation and make the writing bigger. This made me think about when we had Mark come and teach us about positive, thoughtful and helpful comments. Do you have Mark come and work with your class? By Maia
Miller Troy you have a good piece of work you just need to work on your punctuation. Missing full stop.
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ReplyDeleteHi Troy, I like the way you gave us an example of a positive, helpful, thoughtful comment.
Next time maybe work on your punctuation and make the writing bigger.
This made me think about when we had Mark come and teach us about positive, thoughtful and helpful comments. Do you have Mark come and work with your class?
By Maia