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Wednesday, October 24, 2018

Ahipara. with mrs Myers we had to write a great piece of descriptive writing. here is mine

Ahipara
The hot sun lays above Ahipara. People are chatting on the side of the road, the fresh hot chips smell from Bidz drawing their attention.
We are located at the southern end of Ninety Mile Beach. Ninety Mile Beach offers tourists lots of new experiences such as  racing motorbikes and by riding horses.
As the road continues it rises up then down to the famous Shipwreck Bay. Shipwreck Bay has an old sunken ship. There is only one part of the ship that is still visible. The 10km. reef flows around the coast from ‘Shippies’ and has several world famous surf breaks.
The community of Ahipara has all the supplies you need. If you are an adventurous person, go on a treacherous journey up the gum fields using quad bikes. Horse treks are very popular too in Ahipara. A long stroll on the beach is a great way to pass time.             
The local fish’n chip shop sells fresh hot chips and fish. Bidz also sells Ice creams, Ice blocks, cans of food and drinks. It has great quick service. The dairy is basically a general store. It sells nearly everything you need.
It can meet your needs.
Ahipara is a great place to go for a holiday. You have many things to do.
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7 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 25, 2018 at 9:24 AM

    Hi troy i really like How you writ about ahipara and where we are located

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  2. AnonymousOctober 25, 2018 at 9:25 AM

    I like how you described ahipara maybe you could at the end say something that you liked about ahipara.Lola

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  3. AnonymousOctober 25, 2018 at 1:18 PM


    I like how you described ahipara maybe you could at the end say something that you liked about ahipara

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  4. AnonymousOctober 25, 2018 at 1:18 PM

    Hello Troy! I really liked how in your first paragraph you went that extra 'mile' to ensure it lots of detail, and maybe once you've finished one sentence you could use a capital letter.

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  5. AnonymousOctober 25, 2018 at 1:22 PM

    hi troy i like how you made it really interesting.next time you could try to put more interisting words.thanks!

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  6. AnonymousOctober 25, 2018 at 1:26 PM

    Hi troy i like how your in to alot of things and i like running to
    and maybe you could like say some thing about thoes things other then that
    you did great:)

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  7. AnonymousJune 13, 2019 at 10:10 AM

    Hi troy i like how your in to alot of things and i like running too.Maybe you could say some thing about those things other then that
    you did great:)

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