Hi my name is Troy. I am a year 8 from Ahipara school. I like surfing, skateboarding, running, swimming, and dogs. I love being outdoors and doing lots of fun, adrenaline things.
hi this i tamzyn it is a very interesting story about your self
feedback. nice selection of words, they were nice and decriptive feedfoward maybe try put more sentences in to make paragraphs
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Thanks Luna X I had to introduce myself so you will know me better. What else would you like to know about me
I also do indoor football and swimming. Do you have any animals? we have cows, dogs, cats, bulls, horses and used to have sheep.
dear troy maybe next time add detail but don't get to worried you did your best
hi this i tamzyn it is a very interesting story about your self
ReplyDeletefeedback. nice selection of words, they were nice and decriptive
ReplyDeletefeedfoward maybe try put more sentences in to make paragraphs
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ReplyDeleteThanks Luna X I had to introduce myself so you will know me better. What else would you like to know about me
ReplyDeleteI also do indoor football and swimming. Do you have any animals? we have cows, dogs, cats, bulls, horses and used to have sheep.
ReplyDeletedear troy maybe next time add detail but don't get to worried you did your best
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